You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and graph indicate the amount of time males and females spend on different spare time activities as well as on household chores in the UK.
Generally, men and women used most of their spare time on digital means of entertainment. Sports were the least favourite. On the other hand, women spent the most time cooking and washing, while repairing was least done by females.
It can be seen that men used about 137 minutes each day watching TV, video and listening to the radio, whereas women spent 19 hours less than, for 118 minutes. There was nearly no difference in the reading time of both males and females, 8 and 9 minutes respectively. Men spent about 15 minutes for sports, which was 4 minutes greater than women
The graph illustrates that women spend much more time than men washing, cooking, shopping and doing laundry. While it took females nearly 80 minutes to cook and wash, males spent for 25 minutes. The amount of time females used for shopping and doing laundry was almost similar, about 30 and 28 minutes respectively. However, males spent less time completing laundry than going shopping. 37 minutes were used for shopping and half an hour for laundry.
Men used much time repairing stuffs than women, for 29 minutes and 10 properly .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ile repairing was least done by females. It can be seen that men used about 137 m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., which was 4 minutes greater than women The graph illustrates that women spend m...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an women, for 29 minutes and 10 properly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39294676068 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.8065143139 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143819883242 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064290513415 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400408747767 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942557756097 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396545502609 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.