The diagram below shows the number of shoppers who visited a new shopping complex in its first year of operation and the estimated number of shoppers over the same period. Below the diagram, there are two charts, which show the sales at the centre in the first and last quarter of the year.
As can be seen from the chart, in the first two months after the opening of the new shopping complex, the number of shoppers reached by nearly 50,000 double the estimate for the period. During March, however, the number of shoppers dropped slightly before picking up during April and May, once again outstripping projections by a wide margin. The summer months proved not only rather erratic with the shopper numbers at the end of August being no higher than those at the end of February, and also falling well below the numbers forecast for the period. During September and October, the number of actual shoppers declined further, but November saw a noticeable turnaround with the volume of shoppers rising dramatically, during which time they did better than the figures predicted. December saw this spectacular rise continue with the number of people shopping at the centre for the year hitting a peak of nearly 160,000 visitors per month.
The sales figures revealed a marked shift in spending patterns at the complex over the year with greater expenditure on Toys, Computers, and Other items at the expense of Food and Clothes. For example, Toy sales soared from 5% to over 30% while at the same time Clothes sales experienced a hefty fall.
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- Do good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life? Discuss. Do you believe that studying hard will bring a better life? 67
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- In some cultures the parents arrange marriages for their children but in others people chose their own marriage partner What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system 69
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95714285714 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43381786249 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8665326351 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.714285714 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312461142122 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134306487241 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492068588111 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213061092206 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067577979391 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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