In some cultures the parents arrange marriages for their children but in others people chose their own marriage partner.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?
Building a happy family starts from making decision in choosing the best partner for your life. In several societies, parents have important roles in choosing the marriage partner of their children. However, others want to find their partner on their own. In this essay, I would like to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both views.
First of all, in some cultures, parents have an obligation to fulfill all the needs of their children, including preparing their children marriage. In my opinion, this give some benefits for children life. Basically, parents know the characteristics of their children very well since the beginning of their life. Therefore, parents will be able to determine the best option for their children future. For example, parents can give a recommendation about taking the most suitable subject for academic study. On the other hand, not all children want to be driven by their parents in many aspects because they want to be more independent from their parents. When they have already been an adults, they tend to choose something based on their own interests. If parents force their children to follow their decision, it could lead to a disharmony in their family.
On the other hand, other people believe that choosing marriage partner is one of the biggest decision in their life. Love is the best foundation of a family and people have to choose their partners by following their hearts. In this condition, children will feel happier with their marriage and will not be disappointed on the lack of their partners because they accept them whatever the condition because of love. However, in particular situation, children sometimes are too busy with their career and do not have time to make a closed relationship. Moreover, they often forget to put marriage and having a family in their criteria of success while their parents want to have grand children before being too old.
To sum up, both views have some pros and cons that should be considered in choosing marriage partner. In my opinion, children should plan their marriage by themselves but they have to ask the recommendation of their parents to maintain the harmony of their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
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Line 4, column 459, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are sometimes
...ever, in particular situation, children sometimes are too busy with their career and do not h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in particular, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05801104972 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61253683952 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488950276243 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1861451582 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3684210526 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455415939772 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176014498004 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766129274956 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323497884559 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264493508248 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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