The diagram below shows the process off using water to produce electricity.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates how to use water to generate electricity. There are three main stages in the process of producing electricity, beginning with the evaporation of sea water and ending with the supply of electricity to customers.
In the first stage, the heat from the sun makes sea water evaporate and condense into clouds before it falls into the reservoir as precipitation. In the following step, the valve is opened for the water in the reservoir to flow through a pipeline running from the dam. When enough water is collected, the valve is closed and the water continues to run to the turbine, at which the turbine spins and creates energy. During the same time, the water also runs through the pipeline to a pump, which pours the water back into the reservoir.
The next step is that the energy is transferred through high voltage cables to the transformer station. Then, the generated electricity is provided to the hospitals/schools through underground cables.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-19 | Mai Tran 1201 | 73 | view |
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 81
- Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can get so much information through the Internet and study just as well at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 73
- The diagram below shows the process off using water to produce electricity.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06172839506 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86959368225 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5081956202 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16801422267 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794015067519 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084124154243 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120488748889 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118837733933 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.