Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports are now being divided into two categories: Team sports such as football and individual sports, namely tennis or swimming. Although some people believe that it is more advisable to play individual sports, others adopt a view that the benefit of team sports outweighs that of individual sports. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and explain my choice of the latter.
On the one hand, individual sports can enhance self-reliance and self-regulation. Participating in individual sports raises players’ awareness about the importance of practicing on their own, rectifying their weakness and sharpening their skills to win the game. Moreover, whether it is success or failure, it all belongs to the players’ own. If it is success, the players can experience the joy of winning by themselves. But if the situation is opposite, the players can learn from their failure and strive more for their champion.
On the other hand, team sports teach the players about teamwork. In the match, players will learn how to cooperate with their teammates to beat the other team. Learning to work as a team will also help players to be more cooperative with their partners in their work and life later. Another important justification is that people who take part in team sports can make more friends as well become more extroverted. Interaction with teammates and players from opponent’s team during and after the match will make people more sociable.
In conclusion, both team and individual sports have their own advantages; however, it is more preferable to take part in team sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22393822394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91085380443 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.173626303 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225135645642 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874763165607 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780889240007 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164700462644 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661217713355 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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