The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides, information of bricks manufacturing process for the construction industry.
Overall, there are main seven steps on bricks manufacturing from digging to delivery to construction site.
In details, in first step, manufacturer starts digging clay with the huge digger as per requirement, than, clay was filtered with metal grid. Afterward, with the help of roller coaster, clay was transported to the place where, it was well mixed with sand and water. In next step, the mixture of sand, clay and water was given a shape of bricks with the help of mould or wire cutter, while, in this step you get the raw bricks with shape. In forth step, raw bricks are kept in drying oven up to 48 hrs, than transfer them in kiln for heating process. In this process, bricks are heated in 80 degree centigrade to 1300 degree centigrade, to make them dry. After heating process, bricks are shifted to cooling machine for 48 to 72 hrs. As, cooling process is the last process of bricks manufacturing, afterward, process of packaging start and well packaged bricks are deliver to required site with lorry.
- The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006 Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below 73
- Your next door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night Because of the loud music you often lose sleep Write a letter to the building manager In your letter describe the situation 73
- The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U S from 1960 to 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Many people join distance learning programmes study material post TV Internet and study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does 78
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nstruction industry. Overall, there are main seven steps on bricks manufacturing...
^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: THAN_INTERJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ith the huge digger as per requirement, than, clay was filtered with metal grid. Aft...
^^^^
Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orth step, raw bricks are kept in drying oven up to 48 hrs, than transfer them in...
^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nsfer them in kiln for heating process. In this process, bricks are heated in 80 d...
^^
Line 3, column 868, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'delivered'.
Suggestion: delivered
...ging start and well packaged bricks are deliver to required site with lorry.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63510015547 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1420505254 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193895111839 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103106147162 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784264452443 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183286596267 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826392047125 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.