The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart shows the process in which manufactured bricks are used in the building Industry,it is clear that this process includes nine distinct stages, from The initial digging of clay to the eventual production of delivery ready bricks,
At the first stage of bricks manufacturing, clay is collected through heavy digging Machines then in the second phase its transferred to the metal grid purifying It and separating the clay from impurities while transporting it on the roller Then by adding sand and water and shaping it by mould or cutting it by Wire cutter thus ending the manufacturing part of the process,Stages from four to nine are about how to make the product that was Made useful, firstly we start by putting the bricks in to a drying oven For around a day to two days to get rid of its moister content and Increasing the life spans of the bricks then we heat it until it reach
An average of six hundreds degrees then strengthening the fire again To the point it reach 1300 degrees the we cool it down for three days Package it and deliver it.,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...bricks are used in the building Industry,it is clear that this process includes nin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Stages
...ng the manufacturing part of the process,Stages from four to nine are about how to make...
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Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...gthening the fire again To the point it reach 1300 degrees the we cool it down for th...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...gain To the point it reach 1300 degrees the we cool it down for three days Package it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61052631579 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61773199079 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 190.0 22.4926829268 845% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 876.0 112.824112599 776% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 190.0 22.9334400587 828% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 45.0 5.23603664747 859% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137608442067 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137608442067 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946395324366 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613143386182 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 95.3 13.2329268293 720% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -104.45 61.2550243902 -171% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 75.0 10.3012195122 728% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.05 8.06136585366 199% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.4329268293 499% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 78.0 10.9970731707 709% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.0658536585 515% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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