The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The diagram shows the process by which brick blocks are made for the building industry.
Overall, seven distinct stages are shown on this process, from clay as a row material to fully packed manufactured cement blocks.
Initially, the clay is dug out from the ground and then distributed on a metal grid at a later stage. The step after this is using rollers to grind them into small particles. Once this step is done, sand and water are added to the small pieces, and then the mixture fall into a brick mould to be divided into bricks, or a wire cutter is used alternatively. Next, they are collected together and put into a drying oven for around 24 to 48 hours.
Afterwards, the blocks are heated in a kiln at a moderate temperature, from 200 °C to 980 °C, and then a high temperature is applied up to 1300 °C. Following this, bricks are cooled in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours. Eventually, bricks, as a final product, are packed to be ready for delivery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly packed manufactured cement blocks. Initially, the clay is dug out from the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...drying oven for around 24 to 48 hours. Afterwards, the blocks are heated in a k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5393258427 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52651636424 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8391468152 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129642338708 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624869642225 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10114353144 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120832971535 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127569373553 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.