The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows how the brick in manufacture
It is clear that we have seven distinct stages in this process, from the digging in the clay to the eventual production of bricks for the buildings industry,
The Brick Manufacturing process
At the first stage in the brick manufacturing process, the excavator dig in the land which is rich in clay, next they separate all of the unnecessary, which is transported in a roller to get cleaner and eventually we extract the metal grid, then you can cut the brick and shape it by using sand and water or, wire cutter and a mold, stages four and five of the process is cooling and drying, the bricks is getting cooled to stay in its shape which takes 3 stages first put in in 48-72 hours, initially put it kiln and raise the temperature to 870 degree C - 1300 degree C, then in a different kiln which is way cooler, gradually its taken out to the drying oven which it takes from 24-48 hours, following this the bricks can be processed to hit the packaging process, Finally Its out for delivery, which makes the end product: brick manufacturing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...e eventual production of bricks for the buildings industry, The Brick Manufacturing pro...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on of bricks for the buildings industry, The Brick Manufacturing process At the ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ich is rich in clay, next they separate all of the unnecessary, which is transported in a ...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ts shape which takes 3 stages first put in in 48-72 hours, initially put it kiln and ...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'kilns'?
Suggestion: kilns
...put in in 48-72 hours, initially put it kiln and raise the temperature to 870 degree...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56017783595 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 196.0 22.4926829268 871% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 896.0 112.824112599 794% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 196.0 22.9334400587 855% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.23603664747 458% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241047508533 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241047508533 0.103423049105 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21355884693 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689622702621 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 98.1 13.2329268293 741% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -102.08 61.2550243902 -167% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 76.2 10.3012195122 740% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.41 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.1 8.06136585366 200% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.4329268293 499% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.4 10.9970731707 731% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.0658536585 515% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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