Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things.
Do you agree or disagree?
Every nation around the world has their own prideful and important culture, history and society. And holidays like national holidays and public festivals are organized for people to celebrate this special occasions and people enjoy these days due to many activities are on-going. However, some people claim that government waste to much money too these kinds of public celebrations and they should use that money for better matters. From my point of view, government should spend money for the celebrating wisely.
Firstly, people who are living at the suburban area cannot participate these celebrating time or even the rural are. People at the suburban need to go to the city center to join that and it will create many social issues such as robbery, traffic jam, litter, etc. They not only affect the city's environment and people but also wasting time to handle these problems. Secondly, many people have their own nations to travel on these days so the money they pay for these festivals through taxes is wasting and participating fully. Thirdly, that large amount of money should be spend for other occurrences. For instance, citizens' knowledge, poor and elderly people in area and rural's development, public transports, hospitals's upgrade and natural parks. Those will solve the problem that every city has with the emigration to the down town.
On the other hand, ceremonies like Independence Day or New year has some positive perspectives. One of these aspects could it help people to wake the feeling that very special to each people in every country. Moreover, these celebrating events would bring people regardless of ages, gender, regions together and enjoy these beautiful moments that only happen once or twice a year.
In conclusion, festivities for special occasions are important for every citizen and every country just a justifiable amount of money. And developing city living's standard for people is the most important matter that government need to put into upgrading in priority.
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24382716049 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55767752006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9084311955 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272434930548 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942074891162 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961013176895 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169478527794 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137697802317 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.