Write about the following topic:
Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.
What problems does this shortage cause?
What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Environment is the most interesting aspect for recent years. And lacking of fresh water is one of the majority of environment issues which people concerned about. Governments around the world have many solutions for this. However, each person needs to take care about lack of fresh water matter.
The reason that cause the shortage of fresh water may come from many sides. For instance, global warming, climate change, manufacturing wastewater and personal usage of water. Those are such the problems that people really put concern to stop its harm.
The lack of fresh water cause many negative consequences such as, not enough water for agriculture or lacking of water for daily usage. This problem leads to many other issues like crops fails, cattle dies, people will struggle in the food crisis and moreover is the war which should be avoidable. The results for this disaster are predicted with the coming of the death , diseases and many other bad situations. Moreover, lack of fresh water can effect the industrial development. For example, manufacturers cannot make their products, especially factories that use much water such as food production, mineral processing factories and etc. And that stagnation would stop the development of country. For normal use, people need to go to the remote areas that store fresh water like Antarctica for drinkable water.
To solve the lacking of fresh water problem, many governments together are doing to decrease the carbon emission by planting more trees, using vehicles with renewable energies and stop using fossil fuel energy plants. For dealing with climate change like drought, people have created crops that need less water, using special glass house for crops and so on. There are also harder regulations to treat the manufacturing wastewater for better environment.
In conclusion, fresh water is the resource that has very important role in human being and it need the protection from people to against the dangerous factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people really concerned to stop its harm The lack of fresh water cause many negat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23684210526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5534792407 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6252368588 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218483929276 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806540878246 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497024359335 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134451439567 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591792415226 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.