The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Write a report for a
university lecturer describing the information below
The given process depicts the stages in the production of olive oil. It is clear from the picture
that there are seven main stages from the picking to the final sale.
To start with, olives are picked from the olive trees. After that, the fresh olives are washed in
cold water and rinsed several times until they are clean enough. Then the olives are put on a
belt before being put in a smashing device in which they are smashed and separated into
olive stones and olive paste. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is put into a bag with holes
and the whole thing is put in a pressing apparatus where it is pressed to get the maximum
possible liquid. In the sixth step this liquid is put in another separating device in which it is
separated into oil and water. The water and oil come out through separate outlets. Finally,
oil is packed in bottles for storage and sale in the market.
Overall, it is seen that olive oil manufacturing is a complex process involving many steps
and many devices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... olive oil. It is clear from the picture that there are seven main stages from th...
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...ter that, the fresh olives are washed in cold water and rinsed several times unti...
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...ean enough. Then the olives are put on a belt before being put in a smashing devi...
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...hich they are smashed and separated into olive stones and olive paste. In the fou...
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...olive paste is put into a bag with holes and the whole thing is put in a pressing...
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...s where it is pressed to get the maximum possible liquid. In the sixth step this ...
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Line 8, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...another separating device in which it is separated into oil and water. The water ...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e out through separate outlets. Finally, oil is packed in bottles for storage and...
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...s a complex process involving many steps and many devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54644808743 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10743427561 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5835457158 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141187410766 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662915234868 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459983808154 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580133499853 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498322391327 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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