The world of work is changing fapidly. working conditions today are not same as before and people no longer rely on job for life. Discuss the possible reasons for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in future
It is irrefutable that jobs are changing speedily due to fast paced world. Rapid changes of working environment lead people to take more than one job. What factors leads to this phenomenon and what can be done to ready for work in future will be discussed in this essay.
There are numerous reasons that are responsible for this causes. Science and Technology is developed fastly that makes the life more easy and comfortable. Different kind of applications are come to reduce time to do any thing. To cite an example, Artificial Intelligence(AI) can do programming for any task, can write contents every thing can be done using AI that reduce a lot of time. So people can use their time to do another jobs also. In the age of 21st century, people can join in office virtually and submit their tasks in online that save a huge time. They have not any pressure to cook food because online food delivery system is available. As all home appliances are smart, job holder have not any tension to use time in home. They can use this time to do another jobs. Moreover, day by day the price of commodities are escalated, lead to take more jobs to fulfill their family basic needs.
There are many suggestions to prepare for the job in future. People should habituate in using technology for the upcomming jobs. They have to master in organization knowledge, social skills and time management. Additionally, Stress and depression can ruin everything, lead to lose the job. They have to catch how to reduce and controll pressure and anxity during the tought situation.
Summing up, as the scenario of the world changes speedily, to make up with everything people are more likely take more jobs. Although work conditions are different today, people should plan meticulously to balance their work and leisure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84466019417 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60218324726 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.889245239 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.85 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260931000623 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825812802064 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839297671693 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188528941943 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741223948196 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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