The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process,and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

The shown diagrams depict on occasional method of making cement and using it to produce concrete for building aims.
In general, the entire procedure can be split into two specific set of stage:one that is production of cement and another one that produce concrete from using cement. The production also involves the utilization of a range of equipments, namely, Crusher, mixer,rotating heater,grinder and concrete mixer.
As for as, the first process demonstrates the production of cement. Firstly, limestone and Clay put into crusher and it turns them to powder. Then the powder is passed mixer and these ingredients are mixed. Following this, mixture is passed into rotating heater which has constant heat applied at one end of the tube. Semi-finished product is ground so as to produce cement. Next bags are filled up with cement.
Regarding the next diagram, concrete consist of mainly gravel which is made up 50% of ingredients. The other materials are sand(25%), water(10%), cement(15%). They are all poured into a concrete mixer which rotates to combine the materials and produce concrete.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rotating
...ge of equipments, namely, Crusher, mixer,rotating heater,grinder and concrete mixer. As ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , grinder
..., namely, Crusher, mixer,rotating heater,grinder and concrete mixer. As for as, the fir...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e tube. Semi-finished product is ground so as to produce cement. Next bags are filled up...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, then, as for, as to, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25714285714 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80846533734 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6881565813 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31845398501 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110289672141 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131288141087 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220045951842 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139413684968 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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