The diagram below shows what an office building looks at present and plans on future development.
The given maps demonstrate the plan of some obvious changes of an office building in the future with the aim to develop further.
Generally, the two outermost sides which are initially full of grass will be received a significant shift: while the left region should be converted to a outdoor sitting area, the right one is going to be modified partly, namely the emergence of WC, coffee machine in the north of this right area and Meeting area in the south.
Regarding the center of this place, we can see that in the north, the WC is previously situated in the northeastern corner, below the storage (before being moved to the outermost sector). Simultaneously, while the storage should be remained unchanged, the Kitchen and Canteen are predicted to be rebuilt for the office field. When we look down a little more, we will see the number of the office room is going to be reduced from 4 to 2 rooms, whereas the area of those rooms will be increased; moreover, the position of them are calculated to be altered (namely the two rooms will share each other in the southwest and southeast corners instead of all 4 rooms next to each other in the southwest corner as present), lead to the shift of Entrance's seat and the size of Reception.
Overall, this building will experience the introduction of new facilities and renovation of existing ones.
- Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge right and wrong and to behave well Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects Discuss both view and give your opinion 73
- The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010 82
- The diagram below shows what an office building looks at present and plans on future development 78
- Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth Do you agree or disagree 89
- People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past What do you think is the reason behind this What are the effects on individuals and people around them 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the left region should be converted to a outdoor sitting area, the right one is ...
^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...modified partly, namely the emergence of WC, coffee machine in the north of this ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74893617021 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62196039713 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.236664848 43.030603864 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.0 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116439930193 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726628175544 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923857567408 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952600192054 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106861639262 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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