The map below shows the Road System as it is now and proposed changes in future to reduce the number of accident.
The two maps show what construction will be changed in an England residential area for the purpose of reducing the traffic accidents.
As shown in the map, the accidents frequently occur at 3 spots: the first one is in the west of city road, namely in front of the school; the second one is at the intersection of forest road and city road; the third one is opposite to the supermarket, just at a small path way based in the east side of city road.
At present, from the north to the south is the main road forest road, it is also in conjunction with the city road which extends from the west to the east. The west side of city road leads to school which locates in the northwest of the residential area. Otherwise, running down below after reaching the school is the low lane directing to the living district and placing in the west side of forest road, finally linking to the forest road at the end of the path. The supermarket is situated to the east of forest road, residents can get to there by driving along the city road.
In the future, it is noticeable that a roundabout will be built in the heart of the residential area to reduce the speed of vehicles. Another noteworthy change is that the south side of the low lane will no longer be connected to the forest road, citizens here are going to be allowed to drive the only way to reach the forest road, thereby passing the roundabout.
Overall, this proposed road system is likely to be more full reconstructed so as to avoid unexpected accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...is likely to be more full reconstructed so as to avoid unexpected accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, second, so, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46762589928 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48104453995 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489208633094 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.767331407 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221692320115 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095851508032 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370339409258 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125991003992 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247964041279 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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