The diagram details the process of making leather products.
The flow chart shows specifics of "the transition from animal skins to the manufacture of shoes and accessories."
Obviously, there are many several difficult, thrilling steps, starting with airing animal skin, and ending with leather luxury, expensive products ready for multi-use.
In the first phase of the leather cycle manufacturing, aggregated animal skin to ventilation in the open air in a huge area. Although in the second phase, is collected and shipped to the manufactory to start working on it, where it is washed in an enormous sink of aqueous solution consisting of water and lime, and after that soaked in a lime solution, which is solution acid.
However, before being soaked again in a soaking solution that included water and plantings material, by the way, this phase is called tannin, it should be flattened out by a huge pressure machine to be all at the same thickness, following this in the final step, leather polished with different colors and shapes, moreover, shipped again from the factory to sales outlets by transport trucks, Then for users hands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...acture of shoes and accessories.' Obviously, there are many several diffic...
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...pensive products ready for multi-use. In the first phase of the leather cycle ...
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...lime solution, which is solution acid. However, before being soaked again in a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18539325843 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80701616131 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.793966588 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.75 112.824112599 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.23603664747 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656062227909 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395160559559 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277857548152 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390039521871 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353414527465 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.2329268293 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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