The diagram details the process of making leather products.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the operation of making production that is made of heat.
It shows the steps of making the clothes from the animal skin to original clothes
First, the animal skin is being get, dried and moved to the factory. After that, it is washed in both water in addition to lime. As a result of the last process, the leather gets soaked so it is taken to the flattening machine but before this the fabric is being dried then it gets in the flattened.
Thirdly, the cloth is being put in Tannin to make It more soaked. Tannin is made of water and vegetable matter. Further, the clothes are being polished in the polishing device. Finally, the clothes are transferred is the company for the last step which is packaging the stuff and being sold to the shops to be sold for the people to wear in the last move.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aking production that is made of heat. It shows the steps of making the clothes...
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...om the animal skin to original clothes First, the animal skin is being get, dri...
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...g dried then it gets in the flattened. Thirdly, the cloth is being put in Tanni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, so, then, third, thirdly, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50657894737 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34128275031 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5604923852 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910764312565 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448863620841 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053754204261 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760201003256 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05017242873 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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