Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Not surprisingly, criminals and crime have significant negative impacts on the whole society, in addition, most of the development countries, specially global south countries, don't have any re-habitation program for the criminals after released from the prison, which mean criminals couldn't find their daily-living until commit another crimes.
From my own perception, crime is ethical moral problem more than economical problem, and that is the main reason why thief can't stop his bad work even if he became rich, moreover, the governments don't focus to establish a re-habit center inside the jails to provide the criminals with the essential skills and merits to engage successfully with the community after released from the prison, furthermore the streotype the normal community memmbers about criminals stand against full successful engagment inside the society.
As results for above, many criminals mess social connection with other society member although they facing many difficulties to involve themselves in the community such as poorness, unemployment and social stigma because of their unstable records, which lead to commiting more and more crimes, beside that the main issue to not have retratmen period to the prisonner after get out from the jail is that the society loss some members from it which mean if they were putted in a more effective stable life, they maybe becam an effictive part of the community.
As outlined above, jailbirds facing some crusial problems to re-engage in the socity after spend there time at the prison, on other hand, they are steal part of the community, so, indeed all the citizen have a roll to assisst this loast souls to readapt with the society in a perfect way.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...loast souls to readapt with the society in a perfect way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29818181818 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67797876167 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.262968352 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 364.25 106.682146367 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226790111038 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129073943681 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320952602998 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129073943681 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320952602998 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.9 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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