The diagram details the process of producing olive oil

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The diagram details the process of producing olive oil.

The given process illustrates the procedure for manufacturing the olive oil.
Overall, there are many steps in total, beginning with the olive collection and finishing with the olive storage and distribution to shops.
At the beginning of the process, the olives are gathered from trees by farmers with traditional bags. Then they are placed into a machine for rinsing with cold water. Next they are put onto a giant conveyor belt for grinding into small pieces. The olives stones as well as the olive paste are clearly separated after this stage of the process. The paste is inserted into small bottles afterwards.
The next stage is that the olive paste is put into bags with holes and placed onto another huge conveyor belt which transfers it to the compressing machine. It is then moved to the dividing machine where the water and oil are distinctly extracted. The pure oil is finally stored and dispatched to consumption points which are different shops.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'stone'.
Suggestion: stone
... grinding into small pieces. The olives stones as well as the olive paste are clearly ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nserted into small bottles afterwards. The next stage is that the olive paste is p...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99378881988 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51763580118 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4402693812 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216274096656 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933661262948 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893046144735 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15825821673 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712272354169 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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