The diagram gives information on three sources which cause the air pollution in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2005
The diagram gives information on three sources which cause the air pollution in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2005.
It is clear from the graph that there was a downward trend in the total air pollutant in the UK in 15-year-period. Besides, the amount of emission from industry is bigger than that of household and transport through the period shown .
In 1990, there was 7 million tons of air pollutant which are produced in this country. Industry became the main source with about 5.5 tons. The figure for emission from the household and transportation are the same with about 0.9 tons. From 1990 to 1996, while the amount of air pollutant from transport was unchanged and from households decrease slightly, that of industry went into free fall to 3 tons. As a result, the total air pollutant rocket by 2 tons.
From 1996 to 2005, air pollutant from industry and households decline continuously while that of transport increase slightly. In 2005, households hardly produced air pollutant. Industry accounted for 2 million tons of air pollutant, doubled the figure for transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d and transport through the period shown . In 1990, there was 7 million tons of a...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stry and households decline continuously while that of transport increase slightl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02762430939 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71306196554 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0305651663 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33607570064 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166221125456 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.269832349128 0.0843802449381 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334406328346 0.15604864568 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.386114301673 0.0819641961636 471% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.