The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.
The process delineates the production of honey from nectar by honey bees.
Overall, it can be manifested that the honey is produced in seven consecutive steps. The price start with making of gives in which honey will be stored and ends with the produced honey.
To initiate with, the hive is made which is required to store the honey. After that, the honey bees are proceeds to find find the suitable flower which contains nectar. In the third stage, the bee suck up the nectar from the flower which is used to make honey.
In addition, in the fourth step, the nectar which is collected from flower is stored in the cells of the hives. In the following step, the bees swing their wings to provide air to the nectar. Then, the water evaporation take place in sixth stage from the the stored nectar to increase consistency. In last stage, the honey is ready to collect from hives to store in separate containers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ar from the flower which is used to make honey. In addition, in the fourth ste...
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...er is stored in the cells of the hives. In the following step, the bees swing the...
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...e hives. In the following step, the bees swing their wings to provide air to the ...
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64417177914 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24556638886 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.5654287631 43.030603864 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207336767443 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968538141612 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594999085458 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146834566546 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567210972411 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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