The diagram illustrates how to make coffee. Overall, there are 12 stages in the coffee manufacturing process, beginning with how coffee beans are produced and ending at the packing stage.
The diagram illustrates how to make coffee.
Overall, there are 12 stages in the coffee manufacturing process, beginning with how coffee beans are produced and ending at the packing stage.
At the first six stages, coffee beans are picked by hand. After that, they are washed off before sun exposure for 4 weeks. The dried beans are then roasted and turned, and put in a silo where they are annealed. Then they are sent to the mill. Next to 6 steps in the factory, the coffee is hulled by workers before they are screened for classification. Afterwards, they are put into a bag to sell for customers. Besides that, others coffee are canned to display in shops or supermarkets.
The diagram illustrates how to make coffee.
Overall, there are 12 stages in the coffee manufacturing process, beginning with how coffee beans are produced and ending at the packing stage.
At the first six stages, coffee beans are picked by hand. After that, they are washed off before sun exposure for 4 weeks. The dried beans are then roasted and turned, and put in a silo where they are annealed. Then they are sent to the mill. Next to 6 steps in the factory, the coffee is hulled by workers before they are screened for classification. Afterwards, they are put into a bag to sell for customers. Besides that, others coffee are canned to display in shops or supermarkets.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74789915966 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5931689309 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.310924369748 0.547539520022 57% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.561053764 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7777777778 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2222222222 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452023829602 0.215688989381 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168299253447 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.245465607825 0.0843802449381 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404756127932 0.15604864568 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295464493561 0.0819641961636 360% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74789915966 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5931689309 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.310924369748 0.547539520022 57% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.561053764 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7777777778 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2222222222 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452023829602 0.215688989381 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168299253447 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.245465607825 0.0843802449381 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404756127932 0.15604864568 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295464493561 0.0819641961636 360% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.