the diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building induustry. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
It is the internet the one making the world smaller by bringing people together and helping humanity to communicate easier. I agree completely with this idea because the internet gives us the creativity to devise a modern way of communication.
The main reason for this is that the internet is eliminating all the borders between countries virtually. Now we can build connections to people from all over the world without even having to meet them physically. Just this year, Facebook decided to change their company name with Metaverse, and immediately launched a virtual world that requires only a small device to make the entrance. Let say that I live in Indonesia, thanks to the internet and metaverse, I get to meet clients from India to conduct business without the need to leave my house. That is why the internet is the most fascinating new world that needs to be explored, yet not many people can really understand the way the internet works.
As we all know that the technology of the internet first appeared in the 90s and people are trying so hard to comprehend the innovations that came with it. There are several upgrades to the daily-life system that has been used including computerizing all the archives in offices for instance. Today even in the smaller environment, we can find some home appliances that are 'smart' and equipped with internet-based hardware with all of the algorithms that devise a machine learning technology that can recognize our habits and what we need on a daily basis, the machine learns, sometimes even surpass the way we human think.
To conclude this, I think that we need to keep it open to the options of advancement in terms of technologies in the future.
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- Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ipped with internet-based hardware with all of the algorithms that devise a machine learni...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 291.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7583565468 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6036495638 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0426522054283 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210991752802 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268545711776 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0226208500289 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159062757384 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ipped with internet-based hardware with all of the algorithms that devise a machine learni...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 291.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7583565468 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6036495638 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0426522054283 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210991752802 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268545711776 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0226208500289 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159062757384 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.