The diagram shows how apple juice is produced.
The given diagram illustrates the way in which concentrated apple juice is manufactured.
Overall, it is obvious the best apples pass through ten stages before being delivered to the customer; the three crucial stages are centrifuging, filtration and pasteurization.
To commence with, apples are inspected and harvested from orchards and no mouldy apples are allowed. Following this, these apples are received by a belt which takes them to the washing and sorting section. During the third stage, the washed apples are then macerated by a grinder or apple mill and turned into apple mash.
Centrifuging is one of the crucial processes that takes place in the pressing machine. The mashed apple concentration's water is extracted here and then enhanced with fragrance.
Subsequently, the next two significant phases are filtration, followed by pasteurization of the concentrate at 80°C. Finally, individual bottles are filled with the post-pasteurized concentrate before being packed and delivered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... here and then enhanced with fragrance. Subsequently, the next two significant p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68874172185 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1712105679 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9619855049 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19524772997 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818915291168 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834501601497 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10836530756 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096880690709 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.