The diagram depicts the way in which a hydroelectric power station uses water to create elecrticity. As is observed, the entire process of electricity production is time consuming.
It is clearly shown that the dam acts as a high level reservoir in which the water from the river is stored. During day, intake, which is under the dam opens and the water is channelled to the power station. With the high force of the water flow the turbine inside the power station starts producing electricity and this electricity is transferred and stored in a generator. From there, with the help of power lines electricity is distributed to the national grid for supply. Remaining water is stored at the lower reservoir for the day.
At night the whole process reverses as can be seen from the diagram, reversible turbines is used to pump water from the small reservoir to the high level through large pipes. After this procedure the intake remains closed for the next day.
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining how the process works. 56
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90972222222 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51928326999 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7573037365 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122219368546 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560254143597 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378358752394 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993723921527 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505756323269 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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