The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

These illustrates show how to make a tepee tent. The process consists of 8 steps, from tying the sticks together with a rope to fixing the tent to the ground using a heavy pin.

The process begins with a tripod, created by using a rope to tie three long sticks together and spreading the not-tied part out. Next, other sticks that have the same length are being lied on the tied knot to create a dome-like shape, then, those sticks are tied together again at the same tie knot. The next step includes a large canvas, it is used to wrap around the figure, covering the sticks from the top to bottom, hitting the ground. After that, a lot of small metal pins are used to keep the edges of the canvas together, make sure that it will stay on the stick-figure. In the last step, the canvas is being fixed to the ground by using a bigger and heavier metal pin to make it is wind-proof and stay in place for future use.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2816091954 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0876946027 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1736176273 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.064723311129 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557140606761 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101364284235 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951322659659 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769957900756 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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