The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The process illustrates the main stages which take place in the life cycle of a honey bee.
In general, there are four main stages in the development of the honey bee and the completely life cycle lasts for about 34-36 days.
At the first stage of the process, it can be seen that a typical female honey bee usually lays one or two eggs every 3 days. After 9 -10 days, these eggs hatch into immature insects called nymphs.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymphs grow larger in size and moult for a total of three times before reaching their adult size. This metamorphosis stage first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After approximately 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final stage, and in the next 4 days it reaches full maturity. The process then repeats itself when the female honey bees lay their eggs.
- Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. Given time, technologywill completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with thisstatement? 61
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.CountryFood/drinks/tobaccoClothing/ footwearLeisure/educationIreland28.91% 6.43%2.21%Italy 16.36% 78
- Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 56
- Some people think that video games are advantageous, while others believe video games are harmful to the people who play them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...tage of the life cycle, the nymphs grow larger in size and moult for a total of three times be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42196531792 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09741379854 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9413525074 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241377103585 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124515925994 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114227475433 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199416256041 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106585245828 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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