The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

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The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The process illustrates the main stages which take place in the life cycle of a honey bee.
In general, there are four main stages in the development of the honey bee and the completely life cycle lasts for about 34-36 days.
At the first stage of the process, it can be seen that a typical female honey bee usually lays one or two eggs every 3 days. After 9 -10 days, these eggs hatch into immature insects called nymphs.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymphs grow larger in size and moult for a total of three times before reaching their adult size. This metamorphosis stage first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After approximately 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final stage, and in the next 4 days it reaches full maturity. The process then repeats itself when the female honey bees lay their eggs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...tage of the life cycle, the nymphs grow larger in size and moult for a total of three times be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42196531792 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09741379854 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9413525074 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241377103585 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124515925994 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114227475433 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199416256041 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106585245828 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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