The process depicts the life time of wild species that provides products for the commercial market, namely "honey bee". Overall, the process consists of six stages, starting with two eggs laid by the mother bees and culminating with the mature bee. It is also clear that the average time of one honey bee is around 34 to 36 days.
Looking at the first step, the female bees lay from 1 to 2 eggs per three days, which is followed by the hatching of these eggs 9 days later. After 5 days growing up, the cover layer of a baby bee starts to break out and for seven days, small bees are completely bornt and lived under the Earth's temperature. Living outside for 9 days, the new bees increase the size for three times, this process is called "nymph moulths 3 times as it grows". Following that stage, there are two young adults species with black and white stripes on the back of their bodies and finally, there are two mature bees filfull with body parts for the last 4 days. The mature bees are distinguised by genders which is male and female and each gender has their own work. These bees will continue to make babies and the cycle repeat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
The process depicts the life time of wild species that provides products ...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...llowing that stage, there are two young adults species with black and white stripes on...
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Line 3, column 820, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to make babies and the cycle repeat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24713977941 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4399058422 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211823818801 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970681083343 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513662641987 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180128224538 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454148778021 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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