Essay topics:
The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
The picture illustrates how the honey bee grows from eggs to mature individuals.
Overall, there are four main stages during the development of the honey bee, and this whole process lasts approximately 34 – 36 days.
At the beginning stage, the honey bee mother lays about 1 or 2 eggs within three days. Having been hatched for around 9 – 10 days, the newborn bees also called nymph to come out of the eggshells. After the nymph moults three times after 5, 7, and 9 days respectively, the baby honey bee gradually reaches its young version size.
It takes the young honey bee 4 days to become the adult one. Its reproductive stage begins as the mature female honey bee lays eggs.
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Essays by user Ha Ngoc Hong Gam
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- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee 73
- An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled? 78
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory of higschool programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger students 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 568.0 965.302439024 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65573770492 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42203059346 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696721311475 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 165.6 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4887732186 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1428571429 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239986285213 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126892895754 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350381141428 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158675284149 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345761992828 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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