The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm
The diagram gives information about the stages of the development of the silkworm.
In general, there are four stages in the life cycle of the silkworm, starting with eggs and continuing until becoming a fully-grown moth.
At the first stage in the life cycle, the female butterfly lays a lot of eggs in one go on mulberry leaves. The egg is mostly the size of small dots. After ten days, the eggs hatch and become the grown silkworms larva. They live and feed on mulberry leaves that they consume a large amount of. The larva starts creating silk threats for three to eight days before being covered by oval cocoons. After 16 days, the moths appear and start becoming fully-grown moths. Female moths breed and produce eggs. After that, the whole life cycle begins again.
In the production of silk cloth, firstly, the silk thread shells are collected and boiled in water. These shells are unwinded into 300-900 meters before being given to the twisting and dying process. The threads are then weaved and dyed once more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
...ys, the eggs hatch and become the grown silkworms larva. They live and feed on mulberry l...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat, the whole life cycle begins again. In the production of silk cloth, firstly...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80790960452 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17985401845 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.105602462 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4615384615 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184479953847 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599334209953 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866798810527 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133171579602 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885329189182 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
...ys, the eggs hatch and become the grown silkworms larva. They live and feed on mulberry l...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat, the whole life cycle begins again. In the production of silk cloth, firstly...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80790960452 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17985401845 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.105602462 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4615384615 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184479953847 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599334209953 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866798810527 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133171579602 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885329189182 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.