The given flow representation highlights the information about the procedure of getting admission into the university after passing out high school. It is a clear and coherent representation.
The first step is that candidates have to obtain high school thus, they can download the application form from the website. After that, for the provisional acceptance, candidates may need extra documents and then they can send compiling documents to administration for the approval. It may take two weeks. Furthermore, if the university reject the application form of any candidate, he or she either cancel the application form or apply for other courses and send the documentation to administration office once again.
Apart from that, if the university has accept the documentation of candidate then he or she could go for enrolment and choose subjects related to their studies. Moreover, they have to register with the principal of the university. Thus, they would be able to enter the university and continue their study.
- The diagram shows the procedure for the university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. 84
- Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages? 73
- Many people spend large amounts of money on celebrating birthdays and weddings. Others think it is unnecessary to spend so much on these events. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school while others believe it is the responsibility of the government? Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 74
- Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school while others believe it is the responsibility of the government? Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'accepted'.
Suggestion: accepted
... Apart from that, if the university has accept the documentation of candidate then he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, then, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36645962733 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15917742311 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.7494769852 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214826205729 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725605036774 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590610539399 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138833541895 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149339760335 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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