with the steady growth in modernization.A man has been changed his life tremendously.They have achieved milestones however, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever.One such issue here is of regarding transportation of children to school; is it the responsibility of parents or government authorities ?Through this essay , I shall explore the dimensions and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that parents should pick and drop their children to school on their own.They raise many assertions in defence such as most of the drivers are very careless regarding the safety of children.They often make use of mobile phone while driving therefore,it would not be safe for children as it can lead their life to danger.A particularly best epitome of this is that parents love their children very much so they would safely drop and pick them from school.
on the flip side, there are antagonists to this assertion who believe that authorities should take the responsibility for transporting children to school .They bolster their view point by claiming that in this complex world both men and women have to earn to fulfill the needs of their loved ones therefore they do not have much enough time for transporting their children to school.That is why government have to take responsibility for transportation children.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions , I believe that there is no single conclusion still I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hand so it varies from person to person. Authorities should issue rules and regulations regarding the safety of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20220588235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04529405257 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.124624158 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.0 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.4 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353383935295 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165324892542 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992889624269 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199300638747 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826228634109 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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