With the steady growth in modernization; The lifestyles of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved milestones however, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. For instance the given topic asserts that most of the parents working in other countries by taking their families with them. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through suitable examples.
On one side of the argument their are people who atgue that the advantages considerably outweigh itd disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that in the country like india which is at developing stage, there are no much sources of employment. Therefore, people need to go abroad for having work so they can fulfill the needs of their well beings. It is also possible to say that they are taking their family with them just because to give their children, the taste of higher education which is not much available in india.one good illustration is that parents wants to give their children a best environment that is why they prefer to be settle in abroad.
On the other hand, It is possible to make opposing case. It is often argued that infact it has disadvantages also. People often have this opinion because new generation is going far from their tradition, culture and from their nation by moving to abroad. A second point is that if more and more skilled and well educated people would go abroad to settle, it could create great loss to economy as a lack of educated people .
As we have seen there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that parents can also be well settled in native countries if they would work hard. They should corporate with their nation to make it developed from a developing country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...xamples. On one side of the argument their are people who atgue that the advantage...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dvantages. The main reason for believing this is that in the country like india w...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...which is at developing stage, there are no much sources of employment. Therefore, ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ch is at developing stage, there are no much sources of employment. Therefore, peopl...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...at parents wants to give their children a best environment that is why they prefe...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...argued that infact it has disadvantages also. People often have this opinion because...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to economy as a lack of educated people . As we have seen there are number of ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onomy as a lack of educated people . As we have seen there are number of answer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55919229397 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7203110805 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210526213764 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698698471314 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786653242071 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128928457765 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451875788838 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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