There are ten main stages involved in this reproductive cloning process, starting with taking body cell and egg cell respectively from two female sheeps called A and B and finishing with cloning a lamb as a duplicate of Sheep A.
In the first stage, the body cell is taken from a female sheep called A while a female sheep named B is taken the egg cell out of its body. Then, DNA is extracted from the body cell of Sheep A and the nucleus of the egg cell from Sheep B is removed . The next step is fusing the DNA from Sheep A with the egg cell of Sheep B, which creates a fused cell after that.
At the following step, the fused cell develops into an embryo. The embryo is then placed in the uterus of a foster mother sheep called C. Finally, the Sheep C bears a lamb, which is a clone of the Sheep A.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... of the egg cell from Sheep B is removed . The next step is fusing the DNA from Sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09493670886 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14687540583 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487341772152 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.954629466 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222271568567 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133410286949 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104822866891 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179051352686 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329340214055 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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