The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryis are cloned

There are ten main stages involved in this reproductive cloning process, starting with taking body cell and egg cell respectively from two female sheeps called A and B and finishing with cloning a lamb as a duplicate of Sheep A.
In the first stage, the body cell is taken from a female sheep called A while a female sheep named B is taken the egg cell out of its body. Then, DNA is extracted from the body cell of Sheep A and the nucleus of the egg cell from Sheep B is removed . The next step is fusing the DNA from Sheep A with the egg cell of Sheep B, which creates a fused cell after that.
At the following step, the fused cell develops into an embryo. The embryo is then placed in the uterus of a foster mother sheep called C. Finally, the Sheep C bears a lamb, which is a clone of the Sheep A.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly from two female sheeps called A and B and finishing with cloning a lamb as a d...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of the egg cell from Sheep B is removed . The next step is fusing the DNA from Sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09493670886 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14687540583 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487341772152 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.954629466 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222271568567 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133410286949 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104822866891 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179051352686 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329340214055 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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