The diagram shows
the production of
bottled and canned
carbonated water
The diagram describes how bottled and canned carbonated drinks are produced. Overall, the
process involves five main stages, commencing with the filtration purification of raw water,
followed by stages of chemical treatment and carbon dioxide absorption, and culminating in
the filling and packaging of final products for delivery. The process commences when raw water is filtered and then transferred to another step
where it is treated with water softener and chemicals. Next, the purified water is pumped into
electric heaters where high temperature causes it evaporate into steam. As soon as the
steam passes through a cooling pipe, it is condensed into the liquid form, which is
mixed with CO2 to create carbonated water in subsequent step. Once the carbonated water
flows into a mixing tank, it is mixed with colouring, syrup and flavor to generate a mixture.
The next step involves filtering the mixture at a second time before it is filled into either
bottles or cans. At the end of the process, the final products are packaged and delivered by
truck to supermarkets or retail stores for display.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 51, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'evaporates'?
Suggestion: evaporates
...eaters where high temperature causes it evaporate into steam. As soon as the steam passe...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... through a cooling pipe, it is condensed into the liquid form, which is mixed wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27222222222 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68279267615 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5791459003 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275957001235 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120266347582 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974915141901 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912434850281 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10563353632 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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