The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish
The picture below describes how to produce smoked fish.
Overall, the process comprises a number of steps, beginning with the preparation for fish and ending with the final products being transported to consumers.
At the beginning of the process, the fish are washed and cleared with a knife to ensure that they are qualified for production. After that, the fish are soaked in the container of salt water for 30 minutes before being burned with the soaked finished products for about 5 minutes. Then, the fish are moved to prepare for the next stages.
The process continues with the placing of fish into the vast area of smoking and using the wood to cover for smoke cannot escape. After 30 minutes, fish is added to the yellow colouring to create a color effect. Once they are finished dying, the fish smoked are packaged, after being delivered to the retailers and wholesalers for sale.
- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the traveling public in the US in 2009 89
- Many women are choosing to have children later in life Why is this Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 84
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 36
- Young people who commit crimes should be punished the same as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8954248366 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38475228165 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.927562537 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200452125806 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102712203423 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387051607114 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138872121441 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360711667381 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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