The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish.
The given diagram illustrate the process of making smoked fish on a small scope.
In the overall perspective, this process contains 8 steps. From dissecting the fresh fish harvested, to delivering the final products to distribution centers by truck.
Taking a closer look at the procedure, it is clear that the first phase is to process the raw fish, which usually consist of dissecting, filleting and removing any excess or inedible parts. After that, the fist will be soaked in a mixture of salt and water for 30 minutes, followed by a boiling process that would take approximately 5 minutes.
The processed fish then will be taken out, proceed to be placed in a pot that has a wooden lit, with vat inside for smoking and smudging. This process takes 30 minutes. The smoked fish then receive yellow coloring for a more appealing appearance. Finally, the final product will be packaged and deliver to customers or distribution center using truck.
- The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The graph below shows a survey result of 4000 participants who expressed what important aspects they have learned from the internship they have completed Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel 11
- People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion 67
- People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99375 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70138130176 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6999881037 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200673273905 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892780130833 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102326860114 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153263508946 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115335995584 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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