The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be use in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the government has to be very careful in spending their budget to improve the facilities of the country. some people may think that money should be spent to restore old buildings in the main cities, while other consider new houses and roads would be a better choice . From my perspective, i believe that both ideas is equally important for those following reasons.
On the one hand, it is necessary to reconstruct old buildings in the city to avoid dangerous to the people. it can easily be seen that there are constructions that has existed up to 50 years or even more. So no one can make sure when they will collapse and thus create a threat to people living near those buildings. Moreover, if the government rebuild old buildings, it would be a great way to improve the face of the city. people living in the city for a while must have been familiar with the existence of some old buildings. Hence if they have to witness those being destroyed and new architecture are build up, it will not be a pleasant experience. For this reason, restore old building would be a better choice
On the other hand, the city council has to use their budget on different infrastructure. The same amount of money spent on restoring an old construction can be used to build up two new one. As a result, spending too much money on this would create disagreement from people in the city.
In a nutshell, expenditure on restoring old building can be huge. Consequently it is not very wise to spend to use too much money on this problems. Instead the government should balance out between this and using budget on construct new facilities such as roads, hospital, school,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71768707483 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69240048961 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6684684027 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324545129273 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115528913171 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725959623573 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227585012401 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357615716287 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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