The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures display the ingredients going into a factory-made fish pie, and there are three distinct big periods in its production, named processing salmons and potatoes, then packing and dispatching.
Potatoes, which will go through six smaller steps before being added into the mixture, are the first materials to be prepared on the routine. They are delivered to the factory from the farms up to 30 days before the process begins. Then those ingredients would be cleaned, peeled and sliced. Its cover would be disposed while slicing potatoes are boiled. Afterwards, they would be chilled and stored.
Parallel with the potatoes processing routine, fresh salmon arrives at the factory. Before being cooked in a steam oven within 12 hours of delivery, raw salmon would be marinated with lemon juice and salt. After that, salmon’s skim and bones are removed and disposed by factory workers. Following well-checked by inspector, pre-prepared peas, sauce and potatoes are added.
The final wrapped fish pies are frozen before being stored or dispatched to stores and restaurants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37426900585 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64927126083 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9241739768 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.035158136577 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136964625989 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310912374055 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376652721469 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418991304767 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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