The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the information about cinema changes from 1980 until now.
At the fleeting glance, cinema in 1980 was very simple. Firstly, the entrance had been made in centre of the south side. At left side of entry, cinema1 had been built, but, in right side of entry, ticket had been bought. Next to it, drinks were available while in front of drinks, cinema2 had been constructed. Moreover, opposite to the entrance in the south side, car park had been constructed. Apart from this, toilet had established in front of cinema1 on the west side of map.
However, in current map, there is big development. Entrance and ticket place are at same place as shown in 1980's map. After ticket's place in the corner of lest side, DVD shop has erected in the place of drinks. Whereas, refreshments has rebuilt in southwest corner while a new room has set up between foodstuffs and entry is relaxed room. Furthermore, bathroom has on same point as in 1980's map, but now, it is located in the centre of cinema1 and cinema2. Cinema3,cinema4 and cinema5 has been raised in opposite direction of lavatory, cinema1 and cinema2. In addition, car park area has been demolished.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...ticket place are at same place as shown in 1980s map. After tickets place in the corner ...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...thermore, bathroom has on same point as in 1980s map, but now, it is located in the cent...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, whereas, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80198019802 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5895774144 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2497531257 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2857142857 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0793523057732 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379005036374 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938165719117 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135362351687 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16132321408 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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