Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?
There is no doubt that numerous nations gives importance to tourism.This essay will argue that the benefits of tourism affect the drawbacks, as it create more employment opportunities and contributes to growth of country's economy.
One common cited disadvantage of tourism. Is that it could lead to. The lost of cultural
identity. When tourists regularly visit an area, the natives could start speaking in their language and copy their mode of dressing and way of life. For instance, visitors from foreign countries come to India in thousands. Then , youngsters of India get influenced by their personality. Secondly, it leads to pollution because of aeroplanes, cars which mainly hire by trevellers, disposal's use by visitors and so on. For instance, Agra is popular for Taj Mahal but city has hustle and bustle of traffic on roads. As a matter of fact, it is one of the polluted city of India.
However, tourism's advantages outweigh its disadvantages.Mainly, tourists come to other countries for their enjoyment. As a matter of fact, economy level of that country escalate. It is beneficial to all the countries, especially developing nations. It helps to reduce poverty, scarcity and so on. Moreover, by tourism, many jobs has been generated such as trevellers hire taxis, cars and tour guides during their journey and pay money to them. So that, natives of that country get employed in such job sectors. There are numerous restaurants in which visitors like to stay during travelling. Owners of that earn good profit. Beside it, country's relationship become better with other nation. It leads to prosperity and development. For instance, Canada invites tourists from all over the world and also provides work permit to them. Due to this, economy level of the coutry boost up.
In conclusion, every nation wants progress and happiness towards their citizens. So, every nation invites tourists, by which they explore other country to broaden the horizon of their knowledge. Tourism's advantages are in large numbers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25308641975 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89231751226 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3540887593 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248475603093 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062476904064 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851114613973 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147188691666 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684050835031 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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