The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at queen mary hospital since its construction in 1960.
The diagram illustrate the changes near by the queen marry hospital in three years, after the construction.
Primarily, in 1960 the shopping centre located near the road but, it was destroyed in 1980. And, the two hospital centres were build one was cancer centre another was pharmacy. The hospital has same place in three years it was situate at right side of the shopping centre in 1960. As well as in the place of car parking has not changes how were the size of this place was reduced in 2000.
Furthermore nursing school was constructed in 1980 in the place of farm land which, was located at the left corner Indian 1960. In 2000, the size of nursing school was reduced because the cancer centre was rebuilt in that place. Also, the size of this place expand and, the privacy pharmacy situated between the hospital and the cancer centre in 2000.
Overall, the chart showed the changes in every place besides, the hospital and the size of the road did not show any changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the changes near by the queen marry hos...
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Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
The diagram illustrate the changes near by the queen marry hospital in three years...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'situated'.
Suggestion: situated
...al has same place in three years it was situate at right side of the shopping centre in...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ze of this place was reduced in 2000. Furthermore nursing school was constructed in 1980 ...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xpand and, the privacy pharmacy situated between the hospital and the cancer cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63793103448 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19146454341 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.2525717844 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225976516101 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109916523422 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062564281735 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161443909629 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316948166335 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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