Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only government and big companies can make a difference to what extent do you agree or disagree
it is incontrovertible fact that to protect the environment become a major issue for all over world. Rather than individuals it is only duty of authority and large companies to save it. this essay disagree with this statement as they can never do anything without the help of people.
To embark with, the masses has great contribution to decrease the pollution and improve the places where they live. For example, they can decline the use of private transport instead of this they can prefer public vehicles and car pooling because, it is the best way to control the pollution. As well as, nowadays, pollution are increasing due to the plastic and degradation. If,every person will start to plant the trees and use the eco friendly things in that way, they can curb this problem easily.
To continue with my viewpoints, it would be wrong to say the authority and large industries has no role to save environment. The government makes the rule and regulation and it is the duty of mobs to follow it. Moreover, the companies can invest the money to control the pollution like they can give the consulting to the people, can aware the people about the environment. they can reduce the level of harmful chemical which they put into the rivers which affect the life of fauna so in that way they can make the atmosphere better.
In conclusion, pollution is increasing day by day but, if administration, people and big organisations will take step to protect it then, this problem is nothing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8093385214 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73146762401 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9219405058 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21821634578 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717681897282 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558355953799 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119350650328 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679467821129 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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