The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

The design of wave-energy machine and where it situated based on three different preferences are displayed in the diagrams.
Overall, the process is started from the input of wave direction to transform the energy to be electricity. Additionally, two options provided to locate the machine are in shallow and deep water.
Initially, the wave directs to go into the bottom chamber, then water levels will rise more. Furthermore, there is a reversible process of air flow, the air flows up to move and surpass the turbine from the lower chamber, and the other way is observed to come at the upper one to spin the turbine. Eventually, the electricity is produced by the electricity generator as the result of spined turbine
When it comes to the location, the first option is in the shallow water, with a benefit that it spends a low cost to install the machine, but this results low output because of the small waves. This is contrasted to the deep one, the waves are large so that the electricity generated is a higher than the previous preference, although it allocates expenditure costly.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enerator as the result of spined turbine When it comes to the location, the first...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77127983188 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2299430297 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145309970264 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769057666451 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745593625449 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110516456145 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889037763827 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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