The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The given two pictures depicts the site of school in two different years 2004 and 2024
In the year 2004,there were two school buildings to accommodate 600 pupils.one car park was outside the main entrance and a path ran straight from main entrance to sports field.
However in the year 2024 ,there will be some changes in the layout. Firstly, to accommodate 1000 pupils ,third school building will be laid out in place of sports field. behind that there will be car park 2 which will be directly linked to main road by new road. building one and building two will also be connected. new sports field will be on the one side of new road behind schoolthe building three.
All in all ,there will be lot changes in the design of school according to need of an hour
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...he main entrance and a path ran straight from main entrance to sports field. ...
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... a path ran straight from main entrance to sports field. However in the ye...
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...ding will be laid out in place of sports field. behind that there will be car par...
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...rectly linked to main road by new road. building one and building two will also be conn...
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...nd building two will also be connected. new sports field will be on the one side o...
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...ll be on the one side of new road behind schoolthe building three. All in al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 636.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57553956835 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28308193524 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.9542883188 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148190727169 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679798289945 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693061089908 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127340378322 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882508939756 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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