The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given tables depicts the information about amount of money spent on coffee and bananas respectively in the two separate years in uk ,switzerland, denmark, belgium and sweden.
It is clear from the tables that in the year 1999 ,sales of fairtrade coffee topped in switzerland at € 3 million and uk peaked in sales of bananas at € 15 million.
From 1999 to 2004 ,uk saws the rapid increase in sales of bananas and coffee at € 20 and 47 million respectively
In switzerland ,sales of bananas and coffee shot up slowly by € 3 million and € 45 million for coffee and bananas respectively

From 1999 to 2004 ,sales of two fairtrade products in other three countries namely denmark ,belgium and sweden increased slowlys compared to the uk and switzerland

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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7264729467 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.215762106 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.333333333 112.824112599 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.0 22.9334400587 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 74.0 1.69756097561 4359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218543383515 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162509500995 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00723652031816 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136908156064 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224278922272 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.2329268293 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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