Countless youngsters these days believe or sent by parents forcefully to various countries. There are both positives and negatives for staying in other nations. In my opinion, I support to study and stay abroad rather than restricting to the same country.
There are many advantages for going and living abroad, It helps the children to have a global mindset, Person will learn about different traditions and cultures,Communication skills are also enhanced . In addition,Chances of learning more languages are more. That is the reason more and more people are showing interest towards abroad life. One more important thing is that the currency of India is much less than many other countries in the world. So, youngsters go abroad to earn money there and once they are financially ok, They go back and settle in their hometown.
However, there are also disadvantages of staying abroad. Initially, when a person goes abroad it is quite difficult for him to get adjusted to the culture and life style. Even the student may feel lonely as there are no parents,relatives and friends known to guide him in this new country. Sometimes, the person has to work hard to earn his bread and butter. Among the most important issues, Education is highly expensive in other countries. Hence, Students take different types of credits or loans for fee purpose and expenses. As a result, they should work hard in the initial days till all the debts are cleared.
To conclude, There are many positives and negatives of staying abroad. Positives include Increased communication skills and knowledge. While negatives include language barrier and costly education. In my opinion, Going abroad is a good idea so that our knowledge increases through this approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, as to, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90676713339 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1161809459 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4736842105 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15700174319 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411915008844 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345522779536 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809321214191 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245895773041 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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